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Old 02-16-2011, 06:40 PM
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Next up: Malcar's Mengagerie (Pts 1, 2, and 3)
An interesting premise there: warlocks creating their own demons. Usually, warlocks summon their minions (there used to be a quest chain for each one), but I'm going to let that slide given the wonderful implacations of this idea.

Malcar is so evil, I can't help but love him. You are correct that warlocks avoid being seen with their demonic minions, but they should be a whole lot more paranoid than that. You see, consorting with demons carries an automatic death penalty in most of Azeroth's cultures. Practitioners of the Dark Arts must be very careful.

The one thing that bothers me most, though, is the fact that the scene changes are better-dilineated than the part changes. Maybe you should bold the headings or something? Keep at it!
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